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【題目】圖中女子Nancy 是個“手機控”，昨天她在街上因為使用手機發(fā)生了交通事故，請根據(jù)圖片提示，寫一篇90詞左右的短文，簡要描述這件事情，并談?wù)勛约旱目捶ā?/span>

注意： 1. 短文已給出的部分（見答題卡）不計入總詞數(shù)。

2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)， 使行文連貫、通順。

3. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名和校名。

4. 參考詞匯： ambulance 救護車 stretcher 擔(dān)架

Nancy is crazy about using a mobile--She uses it at table,in bed,even at work.

Yesterday when Nancy walking on the street.

Mobiles have become part of our lives.

Answer 1

【答案】Nancy is crazy about using a mobile--She uses it at table, in bed, even at work.

Yesterday when Nancy walking on the street, she took out her mobile and wanted to take a photo of herself. She helped to look best so she moved to the middle of the road. Soon a car drove by. The driver saw Nancy and try to stop the car, but it was too late. Nancy was hit and fell over. The driver called 120 at once and an ambulance came in no time. Luckily Nancy wasn’t badly hurt. She still kept on taking photos of herself when she was lying on the stretcher!

Mobiles have become part of our lives. Only when we use mobiles properly can we enjoy the convenient and pleasure. Otherwise we may get hurt,just like Nancy.

【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，介紹Nancy昨天在街上因為使用手機發(fā)生了交通事故，描述故事，表達(dá)自己的看法。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時，人稱為第三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：Nancy is……，She helped to……，but it was……，Mobiles have become……，Otherwise we may……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。