Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)：

為了更好地開展八年級學(xué)生的研學(xué)旅行( study travel)，學(xué)�，F(xiàn)面向全年級征集活動意向。假如你是李華，請談?wù)勀憬ㄗh的時間和地點并陳述理由，簡要介紹打算開展的活動。

要求：

（1）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名和校名；

（2）詞數(shù)80左右。開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

Dear leaders,

I am Li Hua from Class, Grade 8. _________________________________________________

______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

We can discuss the details(細(xì)節(jié))later.

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear leaders,

I am Li Hua from Class 3, Grade 8. Here is my advice about our study travel.

I suggest going to Wufeng Houhe Forest Park. It is a beautiful park with green water and

mountains. There are many different kinds of plants, birds and other animals. We can get closer to the nature. I think June is the best time to get there. Because there is not too much rain at this time of year and the weather in the forest park is much cooler.

We will have lots of activities, such as climbing the mountains and studying about plants. I'm sure the travel will be both pleasant and educational

We can discuss the details(細(xì)節(jié)) later.

Yours

Li Hua

【解析】亮點說明：這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如from Class 3, Grade 8，suggest doing，Wufeng Houhe Forest Park，with green water and

mountains，different kinds of，get closer to the nature，too much，at this time，in the forest park，lots of，such as等。而There are many different kinds of plants, birds and other animals./ Because there is not too much rain at this time of year and the weather in the forest park is much cooler.等there be句式和從句結(jié)構(gòu)的運(yùn)用，既使短文內(nèi)容豐富，又使表達(dá)多樣，是本文的最大亮點。