Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)。生活是豐富多彩的，沒有愛好的人生是不完美的人生。親愛的同學(xué)， 在生活中，你有什么興趣愛好？這個(gè)興趣愛好是怎樣培養(yǎng)起來的？它給你的生活增添了哪些色彩？請以“My Hobby”為題目，結(jié)合自身經(jīng)歷寫一篇短文。

要求：1.語句通順，合乎邏輯，書寫規(guī)范；2.不少于80詞。

My Hobby

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Answer 1

【答案】

My hobbies

Different people have different hobbies. My hobby is collecting coins.

I got my first coin on my 8th birthday form my granedpa. It was an old Chinese coin. I like it very much. I have been collecting coins for 7 years, and I have over 2,500 coins from different countries in different shapes till now. I store them in the box under the bed. My mother often said I had run out of room to store them. Collecting coins help me learn different culture and history. Last year, I donated some of my coins to charity for homeless children. I really think it is worth doing.

A good hobby can influence person a lot. This is my hobby. What about yours?

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇命題作文。在要點(diǎn)中給出了寫作的題目，需要自己發(fā)揮的地方較多。動筆前先要圍繞主題確定寫作內(nèi)容，根據(jù)內(nèi)容組織材料。根據(jù)內(nèi)容可知本文主要是用過去時(shí)態(tài)，人稱主要是第一人稱。寫作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性；語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：本題給出的材料較為簡略，可發(fā)揮的空間較大，所以自己可以選擇自己比較熟悉的內(nèi)容發(fā)揮，利用自己熟悉的單詞句式等。