Question

你每天的家庭作業(yè)都是什么時(shí)間完成的？需要父母的幫忙嗎？請(qǐng)你結(jié)合上面文章的內(nèi)容，寫一篇短文。內(nèi)容包括：
1.每天大概花多少時(shí)間做作業(yè)？2.能不能自覺(jué)獨(dú)立地完成自己的作業(yè)？3.你怎樣看待家庭作業(yè)？
要求：1.不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出現(xiàn)學(xué)校的真實(shí)名稱和學(xué)生的真實(shí)姓名。2.語(yǔ)句連貫，詞數(shù)在80個(gè)左右。作文的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
I often spend nearly two hours to do my homework every day.                        
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If so,we will feel tired and don’t want to do it carefully.

Answer 1

I often spend nearly two hours doing my homework every day. To be honest, I really don’t like to do so much homework, but I have to. I know it is good for my study. I can do my homework by myself and often do it carefully, but I don’t do it as soon as I get home. Sometimes I watched TV for too long and didn’t finish my homework on time.Then I had to do it till deep night. I think doing homework is necessary, but it can’t take us too long time.
If so,we will feel tired and don’t want to do it carefully.

試題分析：這是一篇提綱作文，所給提綱要點(diǎn)清晰，要求明確，我們要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真審題，勾勒要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。行文中要注意人稱、時(shí)態(tài)的變化及主謂一致問(wèn)題。同時(shí)注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文能夠根據(jù)寫作提示，較好地把閱讀文章中與寫作相關(guān)的內(nèi)容進(jìn)行歸納，內(nèi)容覆蓋所有要點(diǎn)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，考生有較大的發(fā)揮空間；同時(shí)靈活使用復(fù)雜句式，使文章自然流暢。文章中還使用了一些的常用的句式和短語(yǔ)，如：spend---doing sth、to be honest、be good for、as soon as、on time等，這為文章增色不少。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些常用句式及短語(yǔ)，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理。