Question

【題目】初中生活即將結(jié)束，豐富多彩的學(xué)�；顒�(dòng)一定給你留下了許多美好的回憶。根據(jù)圖表提示，選擇一次你最喜歡的活動(dòng)進(jìn)行描述。

內(nèi)容包括：1．此次活動(dòng)的過(guò)程；

2．你的收獲或感受。

要求：1．詞數(shù)：80-100。開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

2．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名和人名。

Answer 1

【答案】My junior school life is coming to an end. I had a lot of sweet memories. Of them, I’d like to share with you my favorite story about a basketball game. Our team got a good start by beating two strong teams. However, our captain hurt his finger during the third game. He is the brain of our team. When thinking of losing of the center, we were all down and couldn’t concentrate on the next match. Our captain found this and encouraged us to fight on and cheered us up. With the help of our captain, we played as well as the first two games. Seeing our captain waving his injured finger, we made our biggest efforts in the following games. With the cheers of our students ,we won the champion. During the celebrations, we threw our captain into the air. I would never forget it because I understood the importance of teamwork for the first time.

【解析】首先：認(rèn)真審題，明確要求。體裁：記敘文。人稱：第一人稱。時(shí)態(tài)：一般過(guò)去時(shí)為主，兼帶一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：分享比賽，開(kāi)頭形勢(shì)很好，隊(duì)長(zhǎng)受傷，鼓勵(lì)我們繼續(xù)比賽，最終取得勝利，歡欣鼓舞，將隊(duì)長(zhǎng)拋入上空，團(tuán)隊(duì)協(xié)作的重要性。其次：畫(huà)出要點(diǎn)，以免遺漏。緊接著：圍繞中心，添加細(xì)節(jié)。寫(xiě)出的詞匯和短語(yǔ)。如： share with, a good start, hurt his finger/get his finger hurt, encourage sb. to do/cheer sb. up, make all efforts to do , throw…into the air, the importance of teamwork等等。然后注意表達(dá)，連貫得體，適當(dāng)使用高級(jí)詞匯和固定句型如：however, when thinking…,with the help of ….,seeing….等等。最后：仔細(xì)檢查，工整書(shū)寫(xiě)。