Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

假如你是Millie，請(qǐng)你給班主任(Mr Wu) 寫一封推薦信，推薦Sandy為班長(zhǎng)。信中要對(duì)Sandy進(jìn)行全面介紹, 90詞左右。

1. 有許多優(yōu)良的個(gè)人品質(zhì)

2. 是一個(gè)自信和勤奮的人，而且對(duì)一切事物充滿好奇

3. 富有創(chuàng)造力，經(jīng)常能提出各種各樣的新想法

4. 她很樂于助人，我們?nèi)闭n時(shí)經(jīng)常幫我們補(bǔ)習(xí)功課

5. 她知道如何做到勞逸結(jié)合

6. 充滿愛心，……

7. 她是班長(zhǎng)的最佳人選。

注意事項(xiàng)：1.短文須包括所給內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，要求語句通順。 2.第6點(diǎn)須用1-2句話展開合理想象。

Dear Mr Wu,

I’d like to recommend Sandy as our monitor.

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I hope you can agree with me

Yours,

Millie

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Mr Wu,

I’d like to recommend Sandy as our monitor. I think she has many good personal qualities. She is confident and hard-working. She is curious about everything. She is creative enough to come up with all kinds of new ideas. She is helpful. She often helps us with our lessons if we are absent from school. She knows how to achieve a balance between her schoolwork and her hobbies. She has a heart full of love and she is always ready to help others. She often donates her pocket money to someone in need. I think she is the most suitable person to be our monitor.

I hope you can agree with me

Yours,

Millie

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱作文。題目所給材料內(nèi)容比較詳細(xì)，條理清楚，我們要做的就是用英語把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真審題，深入挖掘題材內(nèi)涵，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。行文時(shí)要注意人稱、時(shí)態(tài)的搭配及主謂一致問題，同時(shí)注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

寫作亮點(diǎn): 這篇短文涵蓋了題目要求的所有要點(diǎn)內(nèi)容，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，意思連貫，符合邏輯。在文章的結(jié)構(gòu)組織上使用了簡(jiǎn)單句和復(fù)合句，文章脈絡(luò)清晰，自然流暢。同時(shí)文章還使用了一些常用的句式和短語，如：be curious about、come up with、help sb with sth、be absent from、achieve a balance between …and …、be ready to、donate… to…等，這為文章增色不少。