Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

長大意味著什么？是關(guān)心、幫助同學(xué)，是體貼、理解父母，是感恩、回報(bào)親朋師長，還是……請以 “I am Not a Child Anymore” 為題，敘述你在學(xué)習(xí)和生活中經(jīng)歷的一件或兩件事，談?wù)勀銓﹂L大的理解。

要求：1. 不少于100詞；2. 語言流暢、書寫規(guī)范。

Answer 1

【答案】I am Not a Child Anymore

I have changed a lot in the past three years. I used to be weak and short. But now I am strong and as tall as my mother. The most important thing is that I have learned to care about others.

It was a Wednesday evening. When I went back home, no one was in. So I cooked supper. I didn't know my mother was ill until my parents came back from the hospital. They both said the meal was delicious, although it tasted a little salty. At bedtime, I fetched hot water for my mother to wash feet. My mother said, “Dear, you've really grown up. ”

It was the first time that I had realized I was not a child anymore.

【解析】

話題作文寫出的句子要達(dá)意，完整，語法正確，合乎習(xí)慣，特別是句式，謂語動詞形式要有根有據(jù)，選用比較有把握的詞匯，用恰當(dāng)?shù)木湫蛯懗龃_切反映內(nèi)容要求的句子。英語作文要注意人稱和時態(tài)，注意提供的觀點(diǎn)、材料，要注意句子的完整性，謂語動詞的正確形式，句子之間的銜接和過渡。英語作文，要忠實(shí)于材料，注意用好連詞，多用非謂語，慎用較難的句型，一定不能寫錯句。