Question

假設(shè)你將代表你校2013屆畢業(yè)生在學(xué)校畢業(yè)典禮上發(fā)言，請你用英語寫一篇發(fā)言稿，發(fā)言稿的內(nèi)要點(diǎn)如下表所示。

回顧	在美麗的學(xué)校學(xué)習(xí)了三年; 將會(huì)永遠(yuǎn)記住它 老師們總是盡力把課上得生動(dòng)有趣 課余生活豐富多彩; 參加這些活動(dòng)很有樂趣 學(xué)到了很多知識(shí); 也取得了很大的進(jìn)步
感謝	老師和父母的支持和幫助
祝愿	……

注意：

發(fā)言稿須包括所有的要點(diǎn)，要求語句通順、意思連貫；

表格中”祝愿”一欄，請用自己的2至3句話展開合理想象，作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右，發(fā)言稿的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Good afternoon, ladies and gentlemen, my dear teachers and fellow graduates.

It is a great honour for me to make a speech on behalf of (代表) the graduating class of 2013. _________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________

Goodbye, our beautiful school, our dear teachers and our friends.

Thank you for listening.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

We have studied in this beautiful school for three years. We will remember it for ever. Our teachers always try their best to make their lessons lively and interesting. After-school activities are rich and colourful. We have fun taking part in them. We have learned a lot. We have also made great progress. We want to thank our teachers and parents for their support and help. / We are grateful to our teachers and parents for their support and help. I wish our school more beautiful and all of us a wonderful future.  

【解析】

試題分析：本書面表達(dá)是一篇發(fā)言稿，首先是回顧過去，所以本部分應(yīng)該用過去時(shí)；然后是感謝應(yīng)該用現(xiàn)在時(shí)，最后是祝愿，可以用將來時(shí)。由于本發(fā)言稿是代表同學(xué)們做的，故人稱應(yīng)該用we，不要用I。應(yīng)注意連詞和固定短語的用法，注意書寫時(shí)應(yīng)該包括所以內(nèi)容。

考點(diǎn)：提綱作文

點(diǎn)評(píng)：本題的難點(diǎn)在于確定文章的時(shí)態(tài)及人稱，很多同學(xué)會(huì)用第一人稱進(jìn)行書寫。其次，對于提綱作文，書寫時(shí)一定要有層次性。