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假入你是凱特，非常喜歡音樂(lè)，大部分空閑時(shí)間都花在音樂(lè)上面。請(qǐng)你以 I like music 為題，寫(xiě)一篇70詞左右的短文。要求至少寫(xiě)出你喜歡音樂(lè)的三個(gè)原因。

I like music very much . I spend most of my free time on music.                           

                                                                                   

                                                                                   

                                                                                   

                                                                                    

                                                                                    

                                                                                    

                                                                                    

                                                                                    

                                                                                    

                                                                                    

                                                                                    

                                                                                    

                                                                                    

                                                                                    

                                                                                    

                                                                                    

 

Answer 1

【答案】

I like music very much . I spend most of my free time on music. When I am free, I always listen to my MP4 player or play the piano. I began to play the piano when I was 5 years old. I like music because it can make me feel relaxed and happy. And I have also made a lot of friends because of music. My friends and I often talk about different kinds of music together. What’s more, I can learn a lot when I enjoy music. For example, I can know a country’s tradition by listening to music.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇命題作文。在要點(diǎn)中給出了寫(xiě)作的大致方向，需要自己發(fā)揮的地方較多，注意描述自己喜歡音樂(lè)的三點(diǎn)原因。結(jié)合內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱是單數(shù)第一人稱。寫(xiě)作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性，注意使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系；語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。

考點(diǎn)：命題作文的寫(xiě)作

點(diǎn)評(píng)：本題給出的材料較為簡(jiǎn)略，可發(fā)揮的空間較大，所以自己可以選擇自己比較熟悉的內(nèi)容發(fā)揮，利用自己熟悉的單詞句式等。