Question

 書(shū)面表達(dá)。（15分）

請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表提供的材料，為中學(xué)生朋友寫(xiě)一篇題為“Always Be Careful”的短文。

在家	看完電視后，及時(shí)關(guān)掉。獨(dú)自在家時(shí)，不要讓陌生人進(jìn)屋，不邀請(qǐng)網(wǎng)友來(lái)家。
在學(xué)校	不要在教室里互相追逐；在運(yùn)動(dòng)時(shí)，注意保護(hù)自己。
在路上	遵守交通規(guī)則，比如：騎車時(shí)不要聽(tīng)音樂(lè)；過(guò)馬路時(shí)，注意紅綠燈。

參考詞匯：網(wǎng)友：friends online 追逐run after

注意：1、請(qǐng)將作文答案寫(xiě)在答題卡對(duì)應(yīng)位置。

2、內(nèi)容必須包括表格中的所有信息,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。（文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名或校名）

3、詞數(shù)：70-90.（開(kāi)頭結(jié)尾已給出，不記入總詞數(shù)）

Always Be Careful

As a middle school student, We should try to stay away from danger as the problem of safety is becoming more and more serious.

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If all these are kept in mind, you sure to enjoy a much safer life.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

After watching TV, you are supposed to turn it off in time. If you’re home alone, don’t open the door for strangers easily or invite friends that you have made online to your home.

While you are at school, running after each other in the classroom can be dangerous. At the same time, you should remember to protect yourself until doing sports. Once you are in the street traffic rules should be obeyed all the time. For example, never listen to music until while riding a bike, Besides, always follow the traffic lights.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。題目中給出的材料較為簡(jiǎn)略，動(dòng)筆前應(yīng)根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容組織語(yǔ)言，列出簡(jiǎn)單提綱，確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)，句式，關(guān)鍵單詞等問(wèn)題。注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。結(jié)合材料可知本文主要是第二人稱，時(shí)態(tài)一般應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，注意情態(tài)動(dòng)詞should后面動(dòng)詞用原形。為了是表達(dá)更有邏輯性，可以使用序數(shù)詞，連接詞等。

考點(diǎn)：關(guān)于應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作

點(diǎn)評(píng)：此類作為首先要做的就是認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不能跑題偏題。寫(xiě)作中注意一些基礎(chǔ)的寫(xiě)作常識(shí)，不犯低級(jí)錯(cuò)誤。只要平時(shí)積累足夠，就一定能獲得滿意的分?jǐn)?shù)。另外為了應(yīng)付考試，可以有選擇的背誦一些范文，這樣應(yīng)考時(shí)就會(huì)有法可依。