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【題目】上個月，習(xí)大大訪問英國，進(jìn)行了中英兩國多方面交流。為加深兩國更多文化理解和交流，我校組織了一次中英學(xué)生對比的調(diào)查活動。請你根據(jù)以下調(diào)查結(jié)果，寫一篇調(diào)查結(jié)果的報告。
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	中國學(xué)生	英國學(xué)生
性格	更外向	更嚴(yán)肅，更安靜
校園生活	學(xué)習(xí)更努力，作業(yè)更多	更擅長運動，喜歡參與各種聚會
興趣愛好	30%看書；70%上網(wǎng)	60%足球；40%畫畫
飲食習(xí)慣	吃更多蔬菜和水果	吃更多肉

要求：要點齊全，可適當(dāng)增加自己的看法。詞數(shù)80字左右，文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名。報告的開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。
Hello , everyone . Today I'd like to talk about the differences between Chinese students and English students .

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【答案】Hello , everyone . Today I'd like to talk about the differences between Chinese students and English students .Chinese students are more outing than English students .English students are quieter and more serious and good at sports.They enjoy taking part in all kinds of activities.However,Chinese students work hard and do much homework every day.Thirty percent of Chinese students like reading in their spare time and seventy of them love to surf the Internet.Sixty percent of English students like playing football and forty percent of them are good at drawing.Chinese students like vegetables and fruit and English students like more meat.
【解析】短文敘述的是英國學(xué)生和中國學(xué)生在校園生活、興趣愛好和飲食習(xí)慣的不同，所以句子的主語應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時，要注意主謂一致，所寫的句子要符合英語語法，不能遺漏要點。盡量使用高級詞匯。

寫作亮點：短文用了一些短語和句式，如：talk about sth談?wù)撃呈拢?enjoy doing sth喜歡做某事；take part in all kinds of activities參加各種各樣的活動。用了and連詞，增加了文章的亮點。