Question

初中階段的學(xué)習(xí)生活即將結(jié)束，在離校之前，同學(xué)們討論怎樣做一件有意義的事。請根

據(jù)表中信息寫一篇英語短文，為某英語報舉辦的征文比賽投稿。

有的同學(xué)建議	給學(xué)校買禮物，感謝母校老師
另外一些同學(xué)建議	用零花錢給災(zāi)區(qū)和貧困地區(qū)的學(xué)生買學(xué)習(xí)用品
你的建議及感想	……

注意：詞數(shù)為80-100詞。 短文開頭已給出，但不計入總詞數(shù)。

提示用語：災(zāi)區(qū)：disaster areas

We’ll leave school soon. Now my classmates are discussing how to do a meaningful thing before leaving school.

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Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version:

We’ll leave school soon. Now my classmates are discussing how to do a meaningful thing before leaving school. Some students think we should buy a proper gift for our school and thank the teachers for helping and taking care of us. Others think we should buy pencils, pens , notebooks, schoolbags and some other school things for the children in the disaster areas and poor areas.

I think we can …

As students, we should thank those who help us. We should help those in need and do a bit for our society.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，題目中給出的材料較為齊全。動筆前應(yīng)根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容組織語言，列出簡單提綱，確定句子的時態(tài)，關(guān)鍵單詞等問題。寫作中注意將同學(xué)們的建議介紹清楚，并介紹自己的建議及感想，不要遺漏要點。寫作中注意使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

考點：應(yīng)用文寫作

點評：此類作為首先要做的就是認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不能跑題偏題。寫作中注意一些基礎(chǔ)的寫作常識，不犯低級錯誤。只要平時積累足夠，就一定能獲得滿意的分?jǐn)?shù)。另外為了應(yīng)付考試，可以有選擇的背誦一些范文，這樣應(yīng)考時就會有法可依。