Question

【題目】書面表達。

初中階段的學習和生活即將結(jié)束，你的老師陪伴你度過了三年的校園生活�；仡櫰渲械狞c點滴滴，久久不能忘記。請你用英文給你的某一位教師寫封信，和他(她)說說感激的心里話。要點提示：

教師表現(xiàn)	1．工作努力，認真； 2．教學耐心(patient adj.)，待人友好。
留存記憶	1．嚴格要求也關(guān)愛學生； 2．師生相處和睦； 3．給予學習上和生活上的幫助; 4．學生學業(yè)取得了進步。

要求：1．內(nèi)容包括所有提示要點，意思完整，語言規(guī)范。

2．可適當發(fā)揮，增加細節(jié)，使語句連貫通暢。

3．文中不要出現(xiàn)你的真實姓名和學校。

4．80詞左右，信的首尾已寫好．不計入總詞數(shù)。

Dear my teacher,

Leaving you and lovely junior school life, I have so many words from my heart to say.

Thank you again for what you've done for us! All the best to you!21·

TYOUIOPfh，

Yours,

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear my teacher,

Leaving you－lovely junior school life, I have so many words from my heart to say.

Since you became my English teacher three years ago, you’ve always been working hard. I won't forget how interesting your lessons are and how friendly you are. You’re strict with us in study and also take care of us kindly. All my classmates agree we get on well with each other for these years. I still remember when I failed in an exam, you encouraged me to keep trying. When I had trouble in life, you told me to be brave.

Because of your help, many students, including me, are more and more interested in English and make much progress, too. You have given me so much.

Yours,

Amy

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱作文。本文作者主要寫三年的校園生活的回憶，全文所用時態(tài)有一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)、一般過去時態(tài)，一般將來時態(tài)，還有現(xiàn)在完成時態(tài)。同時應選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。小作者還必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等。

寫作亮點：文中使用了非常好的短語和句子為文章增色不少，例如from my heart，be strict with,take care of ,get on well with ,each other等短語，文中還用到了時間狀語從句 when I failed in an exam, When I had trouble in life,Since you became my English teacher three years ago；賓語從句 I won't forget how interesting your lessons are and how friendly you are， All my classmates agree we get on well with each other for these years；感嘆句 how interesting your lessons are，how friendly you are.多種時態(tài)運用自如，例如現(xiàn)在完成進行時you’ve always been working hard，一般將來時I won't forget，一般過去時when I failed in an exam.文章層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達流暢。