Question

人人都喜歡音樂，它在不同的場合給人們帶來不同的感受。上周，你班就“中學(xué)生做作業(yè)時是否該聽音樂”這一話題進(jìn)行了討論，你（Tom）對你班同學(xué)（45人）的討論結(jié)果進(jìn)行了統(tǒng)計(jì)。請你根據(jù)統(tǒng)計(jì)表及要求，以“Is it OK for middle school students to do homework with music on?”為題寫一篇90詞以上的短文向你的英語老師Miss White 進(jìn)行匯報(bào)。

    要求：1、短文既要包括對統(tǒng)計(jì)結(jié)果的介紹，也要闡述你自己的觀點(diǎn)；

          2、短文的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；

          3、短文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的真實(shí)信息。

陳述方	主要觀點(diǎn)
贊成者（20人）	1、身體放松；2、消除干擾；3、愉悅心情
反對者（24人）	1、分散精力，增加差錯；2、感到疲倦；3、浪費(fèi)時間
你的觀點(diǎn)	……

Is it OK for middle school students to do homework with music on?

    Everyone loves music and it can bring us different feelings in different situations. Last week we had a discussion about whether it is OK for middle school students to do homework with music on or not. Here is the result.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

Is it OK for middle school students to do homework with music on?

Everyone loves music and it can bring us different feelings in different situations. Last week we had a discussion about whether it is OK for middle school students to do homework with music on or not. Here is the result.

Some classmates think it is a good way to keep out the noises when doing homework with music on. What’s more, there is nothing better than relaxing themselves by listening to music while doing homework after a day’s study. They say they can finish their homework more quickly if they do it with music on.

But others don’t think so. They say they will be careless and make more mistakes while doing homework with music on.And they will easily feel tired if doing homework with music on. Also,they think it’s a waste of time.

In my opinion,I am not against those who like to do homework with music on. If they can concentrate on their homework, I don’t care whether they do homework with music on or not.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。本文給出了討論統(tǒng)計(jì)結(jié)果，并給出了作文的開頭。我們要做的就是用正確的英語把討論統(tǒng)計(jì)結(jié)果表達(dá)出來，并闡述自己的觀點(diǎn)。動筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)來寫，要注意主謂一致等問題。寫作中要適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】這篇短文多次使用主從復(fù)合句，為文章增色不少.學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理.

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