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向全校師生寫一封倡議書A Proposal to Make Our City Clean and Beautiful，談?wù)勎覀兊某鞘写嬖诟鞣N污染，讓我們從自己做起，采取哪些行動(dòng)，來(lái)改善我們城市的環(huán)境。要求詞數(shù)100－120之間。文章開(kāi)頭已給出，不記入詞數(shù)。

　　May 4, 2010

　　My dear schoolmates,

　　We live together in the city of Nanjing, breathing the same air around．It is our duty to make our city cleaner and more beautiful．

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　　Yours sincerely,

　　All students of Class 1, Grade 9

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April 24,2010 　　My dear schoolmates, 　　We live together in the city of Nanjing, breathing the same air around．It is our duty to make our city cleaner and more beautiful． 　　Now our city is facing some serious problems．As more people own cars today, and this becomes a main cause of the air pollution．Waste water in our daily life makes the rivers smell．And we usr too many things made of plastic．It's important for us to take actions to protect our city． 　　As a student, everyone can do many things to help．First, let's walk or ride bikes to school．Second, we should clean the rubbish in time and often keep open the doors and windows of the classroom．We can also put the rubbish into different parts to be used again．Third, we try to use paper bags instead of plastic bags while shopping．Finally, we should plant more trees and flowers around us． 　　My dear schoolmates, join us and do something now！Our city will look nice and beautiful if every one takes actions from now on． 　　Yours sincerely, 　　All students of Class 1, Grade 9 　　書面表達(dá)評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)： 　　第五檔：(14－15分)能寫明全部要點(diǎn)，語(yǔ)言基本無(wú)誤或有少量拼寫錯(cuò)誤，行文流暢，表達(dá)清楚。 　　第四檔：(11－13分)能寫明大部分要點(diǎn)，語(yǔ)言有一些錯(cuò)誤(句子結(jié)構(gòu)或動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤1－2處)，但行文基本流暢，表達(dá)基本清楚。 　　第三檔(6－10分)能寫明一些要點(diǎn)，語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤較多(句子結(jié)構(gòu)或動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤3－4處)，但意思基本連貫，表達(dá)基本清楚。 　　第二檔(3－5分)能寫明少數(shù)要點(diǎn)，語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤多，意思不連貫，影響意思表達(dá)。 　　第一檔(1－2分)只能寫出若干單詞，無(wú)可讀的句子。