Question

【題目】書面表達

最近，社會上在熱議已由全國人大立法通過的新的國家計劃生育政策，即俗稱的 “二孩政策”（second-child policy）。假設學校本周“英語角”將以此為話題展開討論，請你用英語寫一篇短文作為討論稿，闡述你的觀點。

要求：1. 詞數80-100左右。 (開頭已給出，不計入總詞數)

2. 表明你的觀點（贊同或反對），至少說明兩點理由。

3. 語句連貫，語法正確，書寫工整。

Recently, the government announced that all parents would be allowed to have a second child.

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Answer 1

【答案】

Recently, the government announced that all parents would be allowed to have a second child. Some students object to the new policy. They think the coming little sister or brother will share the love from their common parents. And they will not get what they want so easily as before. The little sister or brother may also affect present quiet life, even the study.

Some students say they welcome the new policy. They think it will give more happiness to the family. There will be more people to communicate with and more brothers or sisters to look after the old of the family.

I agree on the second opinion. And I can’t wait for a new baby in my family. I believe he or she can bring many surprises to us. (116 words)

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇圖表類作文，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點表達出來.本作文中給出的要點比較具體，故需要準確表達.寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化，尤其是數字的不同表達法。

寫作亮點：章結構完整，表達清晰，用了很多比較復雜的詞匯和句子。例如：They think the coming little sister or brother will share the love from their common parents;They think it will give more happiness to the family.使文章結構更清晰明了。