Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)。

為了創(chuàng)建文明城市，共建美好泰州，泰州市團(tuán)委正在開展“學(xué)雷鋒、講文明、樹新風(fēng)”的活動，作為一名中學(xué)生，我們平時應(yīng)該從以下幾個方面來規(guī)范自己的言行舉止。請根據(jù)下列提示，寫一篇短文。

倡導(dǎo)低碳	騎自行車或步行上學(xué)，注意節(jié)約……
保護(hù)環(huán)境	愛護(hù)花草，不亂扔垃圾……
禮貌待人	常說“謝謝”、“ 對不起”、“ 請”等禮貌語言……
幫助他人	助人為樂，積極參加志愿者活動……

要求： 1.詞數(shù)100個左右。

2.所寫短文必須包括以上內(nèi)容，自由發(fā)揮的內(nèi)容必須圍繞主題。

3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名、地名等相關(guān)信息。

In order to build a civilized city, we students are supposed to behave well in our daily life.

First, we should choose to live a low-carbon life. ______________________________.

Second,________________________________________________________________.

Third,_________________________________________________________________.

Finally,________________________________________________________________.

We should try our best to make our city more and more beautiful!

Answer 1

【答案】In order to build a civilized city, we students are supposed to behave well in our daily life.

First.we should choose to live a low-carbon life. We’d better go to school by bike or on foot. When we are shopping. we can use baskets or cloth bags instead of plastic bags. We should also pay attention to saving. We must say NO to waste. We shouldn’t buy anything we don’t need.

Second，it’s our duty to protect the environment. We mustn’t throw litter or rubbish about and we should take care of trees and flowers.

Third，it’s necessary for us to show good manners to others/ be polite to others. We need to say polite words such as“Thank You. I’m sorry and Please” as often as possible.

Finally, we should devote ourselves to helping others. We should learn from Lei Feng and be willing to help others. It’s important for us to take part in voluntary work.

We should try our best to make our city more and more beautiful!

【解析】試題分析：本篇書面表達(dá)以“學(xué)雷鋒、講文明、樹新風(fēng)”的活動為話題，結(jié)合所給的寫作材料，寫出中學(xué)生應(yīng)從表格中的幾個方面來規(guī)范自己的言行舉止。根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示可知本文會使用到一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意連詞、固定短語的交替使用，使文意連接緊密，還要注意使用豐富的語句，注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系，最后最好要表達(dá)出人物的感想和看法。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。文中had better，by bike, on foot，instead of, pay attention to, as often as possible ，take care of, devote … to …, learn from 等詞（組）恰當(dāng)使用，使上下文意連接緊密；文中使用了固定句型It’s +形容詞+for sb. +to do sth., 以及定語從句、時間狀語從句等復(fù)合句，大大增加了信息的容量，使文章增色不少，值得學(xué)習(xí)。