Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)。

同學(xué)們，在我們的身邊，時常會看到一些不好的行為，這些行為污染了我們身邊的環(huán)境。請你以一個環(huán)保小使者的身份并以How to Protect the Environment 為題寫一篇80詞左右的短文。

should	Shouldn’t
多種樹	使用塑料袋
每天打掃教室或自己的房間	踐踏草坪和摘花
保護(hù)野生動物	亂丟垃圾
盡我們最大努力	隨地吐痰
	亂砍濫伐

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Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version

How to Protect the Environment

Today there is more and more pollution and the environment is becoming worse and worse.So we have to know how to protect the environment.Here are some ways.

First，we can stop driving our personal cars.We can go to school or work on foot or by bus.Not only can it protect environment，but also it is good for our health.

Second，we are not supposed to drop litter anywhere，we should put them into the trash bin.And it’s best to pick up the litter on the ground when we see them.

Third，we should save the paper，the water，the food and so on.

Fourth，we should protect the trees and we should plant more trees.

I think if everyone does something to protect the environment，our world will be much better.

【解析】

試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時態(tài)。要求介紹。同時應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇文章語言規(guī)范，敘述清楚，詞匯及時態(tài)運(yùn)用正確，能夠把提示的內(nèi)容敘述清楚，語句通順，意思連貫是一篇不錯的文章。短文運(yùn)用了一些短語和句式，上下文銜接的很好，要點(diǎn)齊全。句子表達(dá)的很流暢。