Question

【題目】【2016江蘇連云港】書面表達(dá)。

為響應(yīng)我市全面創(chuàng)建國(guó)家衛(wèi)生城市的號(hào)召，某校開展了“綠色港城，健康生活”為主題的英語征文活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你以"The Green City , the Healthy Life" 為題，根據(jù)表格中的圖片及文字提示，簡(jiǎn)要描述并適當(dāng)發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn)，寫一篇英語短文。

注意：

(1)詞數(shù)90 左右，短文開頭己給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);

(2)文中不得提及考生所在學(xué)校及自己的姓名。

The Green City, the Healthy Life

As a citizen of Lianyungang, it's our duty to

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Answer 1

【答案】

The Green City, the Healthy Life

As a citizen of Lianyungang, it's our duty to help build a green city so that we can live a healthy life. We can reduce air pollution by riding bicycles. It's better for us to put rubbish into the rubbish bin. In this way, we can keep our city clean. And we'd better plant more trees to protect the natural environment.

In my opinion, I'll try my best to make our city cleaner and more beautiful. Firstly, I can save water by taking shorter showers. Secondly, I can save energy by turning off the lights when I leave the room. In a word, everyone can do something to make a difference. (102words)

【解析】

試題分析：短文敘述了“綠色港城，健康生活”的征文活動(dòng)，所以句子應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，要注意句子的銜接，不能用漢語式的英語，要符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：短文用了一些短語和句式，如：As a citizen of Lianyungang, it's our duty to help build a green city so that we can live a healthy life.And we'd better plant more trees to protect the natural environment.Secondly, I can save energy by turning off the lights when I leave the room. In a word, everyone can do something to make a difference.用了when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句，用了一些過渡的短語In my opinion，Firstly, Secondly,In a word增加了文章的亮點(diǎn)。