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生命在于運(yùn)動(dòng)，多運(yùn)動(dòng)可以讓我們保持身心健康。在春季，跑步會(huì)讓我們的雙腿更靈便；在夏季，游泳可以讓我們保持更好的身材；在秋季，爬山可以鍛煉我們的意志；在冬季，滑冰和玩雪讓我們?cè)诒�冷的冬季找到更多�?lè)趣。請(qǐng)同學(xué)們以 “I enjoy ____________”為題寫一篇80個(gè)單詞左右的短文。
參考詞匯：healthy, fat, tired, active, fresh, chocolate, build up, have great fun
溫謦提示：1、短文要求語(yǔ)句通順、意思連貫、語(yǔ)法正確、書寫規(guī)范。
2、文中請(qǐng)勿使用真實(shí)姓名、地點(diǎn)或所在班級(jí)，否則將被扣分。

Answer 1

I enjoy running
I am a 15-year-old boy. Now I’m quite healthy. However, one year ago I was fat. I liked to eat chocolate, and I got tired easily. One morning, I saw some young men running in the park. They looked really fit and active. So I started running. Now I have a 2-mile run every morning. I drink milk and eat fresh fruit. Healthy eating habits and running help to build me up. I feel well and look fit. Running is my favorite sport.

解析試題分析：本文的寫作重在分清楚層次之間的關(guān)系，首先對(duì)自己以前的不好的精神狀態(tài)及飲食習(xí)慣進(jìn)行描寫，突出自己很容易變累got tired easily，不健康unhealthy等，然后對(duì)自己是如何改變的，通過(guò)自己所喜歡的運(yùn)動(dòng)達(dá)到現(xiàn)在非常的健康，并且也有了很好的飲食習(xí)慣，最后點(diǎn)明某個(gè)運(yùn)動(dòng)是自己最喜歡的運(yùn)動(dòng)。
考點(diǎn)：提綱類寫作
點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文難度不大，寫作條理性要把握好，對(duì)于初二的作文，不要求有很華美的詞語(yǔ)，重在培養(yǎng)自己連詞成句的能力，避免中式英文。在平時(shí)的練習(xí)中要多去背誦范文，對(duì)表達(dá)好的句子，短語(yǔ)要進(jìn)行積累，并默寫，考試前再集中看一下，這樣做到有備無(wú)患。