Question

【題目】書面表達。

升入中學已經(jīng)兩年多了，回顧過去的兩年，你對誰最感激(grateful)呢？請你以Thank you, ×××為題，寫一篇80詞左右的短文。短文必須圍繞以下提示展開：

1. Who is the person?

2. What has he/she done for you? Please give one or two examples.

3. What have you learnt from him/her?

4.What do you think of him/her?

Thank you,_________________

Answer 1

【答案】Thank you, Mum

Dear Mum,

I’d like to say thank you for what you have done for me.

You not only look after me well but also do whatever you can to help me get out of trouble. When I was in Grade 7, I was weak in English. I felt hopeless. It was you who offered me so much support and made me feel confident. You gave me valuable advice and spent a great deal of time helping me practice English. With your help, I improved my English quickly. What’s more, I realized that nothing is impossible for a willing heart.

Thank you, Mum.

【解析】這篇習作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如not only…but also…，look after me well，get out of trouble，so much，a great deal of time，with your help等。而You not only look after me well but also do whatever you can to help me get out of trouble./ It was you who offered me so much support and made me feel confident./ What’s more, I realized that nothing is impossible for a willing heart.等多種句式的運用更是為文章增色不少。