Question

為了進(jìn)一步增強(qiáng)中學(xué)生的安全意識(shí)，提高自我保護(hù)能力，某校開(kāi)展了以"安全為主題的英語(yǔ)演講比賽。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)提示寫(xiě)一篇演講稿。

 

 

注意：1)內(nèi)容必須包括所給的全部要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

2)表達(dá)清楚，語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范；

3)詞數(shù)80左右。文章開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

參考詞匯：be careful, on line, danger, call...for, go bad

How to keep safe?

As teenagers we should always keep safety in mind. But how can we keep safe? Here are some of my suggestions.

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Answer 1

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How to keep safe?

     As teenagers, we should always keep safety in mind. But how can we keep safe? Here are some

of my suggestions. First, we should be careful when we make friends, especially on line. Second, if we are in danger, we must call the police for help in time so that we can keep ourselves safe. Also,we ought to eat healthily and safely. Eating food that goes bad will do harm to our health. Last but not least, summer is coming, and we must remember it's dangerous to swim in the river.  In short, safety must come first !

【解析】試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，本文只給出了主要寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)。寫(xiě)作中要注意從四個(gè)方面進(jìn)行敘述，并自己補(bǔ)充一到兩點(diǎn)。動(dòng)筆前應(yīng)根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容組織語(yǔ)言，列出簡(jiǎn)單提綱，確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)，關(guān)鍵單詞等問(wèn)題。注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，做到語(yǔ)句通順。寫(xiě)作中注意使用連接詞，序數(shù)詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系