Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

假設(shè)你是某英語報(bào)刊“Heart to Heart”欄目的編輯，負(fù)責(zé)回復(fù)讀者來信。請(qǐng)回復(fù)下面一封來信，要求針對(duì)來信內(nèi)容對(duì)來信者進(jìn)行安慰、鼓勵(lì)，并對(duì)其“學(xué)得很累”和“感到孤獨(dú)”的狀況提出建議。詞數(shù)：80個(gè)左右。

Dear Editor,

I’m a Junior 3 student. I failed most of my final exams in my old school last year and my parents asked me to come to this new school. However, now I find I can’t study as hard as before and easily feel tired. I also feel very lonely among the new classmates. When in the old school, I could often share my happiness and sadness with my friends. So I think of my old classmates and friends quite often these days.

Grace

Dear Grace,

It is natural that you don’t feel at home in your new class as you did in your old one.

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Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Grace,

It is natural that you don’t feel at home in your new class as you did in your old one. You failed to pass the exams last year but you have set new goals to achieve even more this year.

The reason why you feel too tired to study may be that you aren’t confident enough. What you must do now is to organize your time well. Don’t work too late or too hard. In this way you are unlikely to get tired.

You miss your old classmates because you studied with them for several years. You may try to know your new classmates and try to make friends with them. I think the more you know about them, the more you will like them. It won’t be long before you find them to be just as understanding as your old ones.

I believe you can get along well with your new classmates and get good grades soon.

Editor

【解析】

試題分析：我們首先應(yīng)該認(rèn)真閱讀讀者來信，熟知信的內(nèi)容，然后根據(jù)信中的問題組織內(nèi)容，然后進(jìn)行回復(fù)。本文應(yīng)可以用第二人稱，主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。靈活采用不同的表達(dá)方式將問題與建議條理地表述出來，注意主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)。語言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡潔。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：本文作者能就讀者的問題提出具體的建議，敘事明確具體，語言結(jié)構(gòu)豐富,如：try to do sth, make friends, get along well with等；賓語從句、時(shí)間狀語從句、定語從句、比較狀語從句得到了靈活使用。