Question

假設(shè)你叫Lily, 請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下表格的內(nèi)容 ，寫一篇介紹你和自己姐妹Lucy的英語短文。

要求如下：

根據(jù)表格的內(nèi)容要適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，尤其是介紹兩人的生活方式時(shí)要從飲食、運(yùn)動(dòng)的頻率等方面進(jìn)行發(fā)揮；

介紹他們個(gè)性時(shí)要恰當(dāng)運(yùn)用形容詞比較級(jí)的句式；

注意人稱及時(shí)態(tài)的變化；

 4.  詞數(shù)80左右。

Person	You	Lucy
lifestyle（生活方式）	healthy	unhealthy
personality（個(gè)性特點(diǎn)）	outgoing；  smart	hard-working ； quiet
same hobbies（共同愛好）	playing the piano;  dancing
last week’s experience（上個(gè)星期的共同經(jīng)歷）	visited the Great Wall, ate Beijing duck, bought gifts for parents ….

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

My name is Lily. I’m sixteen years old. I have a sister. Her name is Lucy. I’m outgoing and smart. Lucy is quiet.But she is more hard-working than me. We both like playing the piano and dancing. She is better than me. So she always help me with them. We like eating vegetables and fruit. But Lucy also likes eating junk food. She eats it twice a week. It’unhealthy. Last week, we went to Beijing. We visited the Great Wall. We ate Beijing duck and bought gifts for our parents. We had a great time there.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，描述自己和自己的姐妹Lucy。本題給出了具體的材料, 所以在寫作時(shí)要注意時(shí)態(tài)，結(jié)合所給材料可知，描寫生活方式、個(gè)性特點(diǎn)和共同愛好時(shí)，應(yīng)該主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，描寫去北京旅游時(shí)，應(yīng)該主要用一般過去時(shí)。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】

如果文章中使用了非常好的短語或句子會(huì)給文章增色，如both、always、like doing sth、help sb with sth。還運(yùn)用了but ，so等使上下文銜接的更好。

考點(diǎn)：話題作文。