Question

【題目】贈(zèng)人玫瑰，手有余香；幫助別人，快樂自己。你一定體驗(yàn)過幫助別人之后心里的那份幸福，請以“ Helping Others”為題，用英語寫一篇短文和我們分享幫助別人之后的快樂。

提示：1. 短文應(yīng)包括圖表中的全部信息，條理清楚，行文連貫；

2. 短文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和地名；

3. 詞數(shù)不少于80，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞。

Helping Others

As the saying goes, “Roses given, fragrance in hand.”_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Answer 1

【答案】As the saying goes, “Roses given, fragrance in hand.” In the daily life, we will meet with a lot of trouble. So it is necessary for us to help those who are in trouble.

My classmate Jason was ill last week. He had to be in hospital, so I tried my best to help him. Yesterday was Saturday, my classmates and I went to see him together. I thought we should get him some flowers, because fresh and beautiful flowers could make him feel good and happy. What’s more, Jason asked me some questions about study. I will bring him my notebooks tomorrow and I will be patient to answer his questions at any time. I hope he can be better soon.

I like helping others. Firstly, helping others makes me happy. Secondly, helping others is also helping myself. All in all, a helpful person is welcomed everywhere. I will try my best to help others in the future.

【解析】

這是一篇話題作文，根據(jù)圖表中的相關(guān)信息分享一下你幫助別人之后的快樂。主要從你做了什么、你的感受如何和將來你還會(huì)幫助別人嗎三個(gè)方面去介紹。時(shí)態(tài)為一般過去時(shí)，人稱為第一人稱。注意作文中必須包含圖表中的所有信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫作時(shí)，避免使用漢語式的英語，盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語。語法要正確，表達(dá)要符合英語習(xí)慣，注意時(shí)態(tài)、時(shí)間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，表達(dá)具有條理性。

【高分句型一】

So it is necessary for us to help those who are in trouble. 所以我們有必要幫助那些有困難的人。

who are in trouble.是由who引導(dǎo)的定語從句。

【高分句型二】

I thought we should get him some flowers, because fresh and beautiful flowers could make him feel good and happy. 我想我們應(yīng)該給他買些花，因?yàn)樾迈r漂亮的花可以讓他感覺良好和快樂。

句子because fresh and beautiful flowers could make him feel good and happy.是由because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句。