Question

書面表達(dá)根據(jù)所給圖畫，用英語寫一篇約 80 詞的短文。要求完整敘述圖畫內(nèi)容。（10分）
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Answer 1

Yesterday evening my uncle was invited to dinner by his friends.He was so glad that he drank a lot of beers. As a result he got drunk.
After the meal, his friends tried to persude him not to drive home , but he didn’t listen to them, saying No problem and insisted on doing so.
He got into the car and drove away. A few minuties later, he was winding his way in the street. And suddenly his car ran into a tall tree. He was badly injured but still alive. The police came to the scene, and he was taken to hospital.
He had to stay in hospital for a few days beacause of being seriously hurt. He was fined by the police and his driving license was revoked.

試題分析：這是一篇看圖作文�？磮D作文要注意一下幾點(diǎn)（1）弄清圖畫內(nèi)容，把握情節(jié)線索，根據(jù)圖畫在腦海中串聯(lián)出完整的故事，注意圖畫中的細(xì)節(jié)。 （2）結(jié)合提示詞，明確考查意圖。所給提示詞可幫助理解畫面內(nèi)容，也是組成句子的必用材料。有時(shí)還會(huì)給出起始句（這就給出了時(shí)態(tài)），學(xué)生運(yùn)用正確的時(shí)態(tài)，運(yùn)用所給或所學(xué)的詞語，盡量運(yùn)用熟悉的句型，作適當(dāng)展開，聯(lián)想，就能比較完整地表達(dá)出畫面的意思了。 （3）切忌堆砌詞語，句子，注意運(yùn)用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞使句子流暢，連貫。 （4）注意書寫的規(guī)范：大小寫，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)等的正確運(yùn)用。（5）注意檢查：?jiǎn)卧~拼寫，語法，動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)，語序，主謂一致等。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】這篇短文能把握故事情節(jié)，能正確的運(yùn)用過去時(shí)態(tài)。合理的利用連詞，如As a result ，After the meal, but ，A few minuties later, And suddenly等，這使文章的表達(dá)更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。