Question

【題目】書面表達

根據(jù)所給圖畫和文字提示，用英語寫一篇約80詞的短文。

要求：1. 完整敘述圖畫內(nèi)容。可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，內(nèi)容積極向上。

2. 語句通順，時態(tài)正確，書寫工整。

3. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱。

參考詞匯：小偷 thief 偷：steal(stole)

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Answer 1

【答案】

One day, it was raining hard when Li Hua hurried to school.He ran to the bus stop and got on a bus. There were many people on the bus so it was very crowded. Suddenly. he saw a thief steal a lady's money. Without thinking twice, Li Hua went up and shouted,“Stop!”The thief was afraid.He got off the bus and ran away. Some people ran after him as quickly as possible. Finally, the thief was caught and sent to the police station. The police and other people all praised Li Hua and he felt very happy.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇看圖寫作，一共四幅圖。做題時：1. 認(rèn)真讀圖，可知四幅圖描述的是在公交車上抓小偷的故事，2. 初步構(gòu)思，考慮用詞、短語、句型和時態(tài)。3. 連詞成句，然后再連句成文。盡可能地充分利用所學(xué)的短語或句型來表述具體的內(nèi)容。4. 反復(fù)審核，修改錯誤。5. 注意所給的漢語提示。一般說來，看圖寫話中的漢語提示往往給定了有關(guān)的時間、地點、人物等相關(guān)的信息，還有參考詞匯都是有用信息。要充分利用。

寫作亮點：本文用一般過去時，清楚地講述了某一天發(fā)生的故事。按事件發(fā)生的順序及圖片順序，把匆忙上學(xué)，車上阻盜，下車追賊，警察表揚的過程敘述得清楚明白，動詞運用恰當(dāng)，時態(tài)運用準(zhǔn)確。文章末尾，警察表揚，李華感到高興，畫龍點睛，主旨鮮明。