Question

【題目】書面表達

現(xiàn)在越來越多的人在網(wǎng)上購物，網(wǎng)購已成為流行趨勢，二網(wǎng)購的利弊也成為人們討論的焦點，請參考下面的信息，并結合就的觀點些一短文，談談你的看法。

1.方便，可以在家買東西，不受時間限制。

2.有很大的商品信息，可以買到當?shù)貨]有的商品。價格較便宜。

3.買貨容易退貨難；實物和圖片有差距。

4.網(wǎng)絡支付不安全。

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Answer 1

【答案】Now Internet Shopping is more and more popular in the world.

It’s a new way of shopping. It has lots of advantages. The most important is convenient. You can shop whenever you like because the online shops are open 24 hours a day. It is easy to buy goods and it is also easy to find the things that you can’t buy in the shop. And they are cheaper. Besides, we can learn lots of information about goods.

Every coin has two sides. So is Internet shopping. You can’t see the material objects or check their quality. Usually the pictures are more beautiful than the goods. So when we get the goods and don’t like them, they sometimes are not easy to give back. What’s more, it’s not safe to pay through the internet.

We should be careful when we shop on the internet.

【解析】

寫作本文需要寫一篇小議論文，主題是網(wǎng)上購物，需要討論到網(wǎng)上購物的利和弊，注意合理分段，使得文章結構清晰，可以先總起陳述，然后用一段來描述優(yōu)點，再用一段描述劣勢和不足，最后一段收尾，這樣的作文就會條理清晰，結構合理。具體來說，每個觀點在陳述的時候要注意表達準確。

寫作亮點：

首段總起介紹，挑明這篇作文的主題Internet Shopping。第二段開始描述優(yōu)勢，這里用到了“無論什么時候你喜歡/想要”（whenever you like）結構，在表達“...是開放的”也很準確，用了“be open”。比較級的應用也相對準確，例如cheaper。連詞的使用也是亮點，besides意為“除此之外”。在談到劣勢的時候引用了俗語“Every coin has two sides.”，是個亮點。“What’s more”也被合理使用到了，意為“此外”，避免與besides重復，體現(xiàn)了文章語言的多樣性�？傮w來說要點均被提及，語言準確富有活力。