Question

【題目】作文

根據(jù)中文和英文提示，寫一封意思連貫、符合邏輯、不少于50詞的郵件。郵件的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。所給提示詞僅供選用。

注意：請不要寫出你的校名和姓名，請不要抄寫本試卷文章中的原句。

假設(shè)你叫李華，最近和自己的英國朋友Peter在談?wù)摳髯跃磁宓娜宋�，他在上封郵件中向你介紹了自己所敬佩的一位作家，他希望你也能向他介紹一位自己所敬佩的人。請根據(jù)他提出的以下問題給他回復(fù)一封郵件。

參考詞匯：work hard；kind；helpful；responsible；role model

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version:

Hi! Peter,

Thanks for telling me about J. K. Rowling. She is really a great writer!

One of the people I admire a lot is my father. He is a history teacher at a middle school. He loves his job and works very hard. To make his students interested in history, he makes a lot of efforts to prepare each lesson. He is also patient and helpful to his students.

As for me, he is not only my father but also a good friend. Whenever I have problems, he is the first person who offers me advice and encouragement. My father is my role model. He has taught me to be kind, hardworking and responsible.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。要求介紹你所敬佩的人，所敬佩的人的性格特征及你為什么所敬佩他。根據(jù)所給的要點可知該文主要用一般現(xiàn)在時，要注意第三人稱單數(shù)形式的正確表達(dá)。

寫作亮點：這篇文章語言連貫，簡潔明了。在文章中使用恰當(dāng)?shù)膹?fù)合句，為文章增色不少，同時也體現(xiàn)出作者的寫作功底。例如：One of the people I admire a lot is my father.（我最敬佩的人物之一詩我的父親）；Whenever I have problems, he is the first person who offers me advice and encouragement.（每當(dāng)我遇到問題時，他都是第一個給我建議和鼓勵的人）等等。