Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

“保護(hù)環(huán)境，人人有責(zé)”，你想成了一名綠色使者嗎？請(qǐng)行動(dòng)起來吧！其實(shí)，環(huán)保就在我們身邊。請(qǐng)以“How to Be a Greener Person” 為題，寫一篇短文。

注意：1.根據(jù)以上提示完成作文，內(nèi)容必須包括所給的全部要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

2.表達(dá)清楚，語句通順，意思連貫，書寫規(guī)范；

3.短文詞數(shù)90 左右。文章開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

參考詞匯：draw, both sides of paper, plastics, water tap, collect, waste, can, sort

How to Be a Greener Person?

It’s our duty to protect our environment around us. ___________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

How to Be a Greener Person

It’s our duty to protect the environment around us. The three Rs—reduce, reuse and recycle—are important. I think we’d better not buy bottles or boxes which people can only use once. We should turn off the lights when we are not using them. We can give old clothes to others to reuse them. When we go shopping, we’d better take a cloth bag rather than use plastic bags. We shouldn’t throw things away if they can be reused, repaired or recycled. It’s important for us to protect animals and plants. We are supposed to prevent the factory from pouring waste water into rivers, lakes and so on. If everyone is doing that, our world will become more and more beautiful.

【解析】

試題分析：環(huán)境保護(hù)是中考常考的話題，對(duì)于本文的寫作學(xué)生首先開門見山指出保護(hù)環(huán)境是非常重要的，是我們的責(zé)任，可以利用it作為形式主語的句式來展開；然后，對(duì)環(huán)境保護(hù)應(yīng)該如何做進(jìn)行闡述如拒絕一次性紙杯，隨手關(guān)掉電燈，使用布做的購物袋，盡量騎自行車出行，保護(hù)動(dòng)植物，防止工廠的排污等，從這幾方面進(jìn)行展開論述。句式上可以使用we’d better，It’s important for us to，We are supposed to等來闡述所寫的內(nèi)容。最后，一句話進(jìn)行總結(jié)，說明如果這樣做世界將會(huì)變得更美m(xù)ore and more beautiful。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：本文難度不大，該生對(duì)寫作條理性把握得很好，對(duì)于要做的幾件事情，寫的過程中通過變換句式和用詞提高了語言的美度。