Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

美麗中國,美麗長江。黃岡是長江邊一座美麗的城市。假如你是黃岡某中學(xué)的一名中學(xué)生李明,請(qǐng)你以“美麗的黃岡”為話題,向你的英國筆友Tom介紹一下你美麗的家鄉(xiāng)——黃岡。

要點(diǎn)提示：1.黃岡位于長江之邊,大別山之南；

2.黃岡歷史悠久,名人輩出；

3.黃岡風(fēng)景迷人,鄉(xiāng)村秀美;

4.人人參與,從小事做起,黃岡人正在努力地保護(hù)黃岡的自然環(huán)境;

5.邀請(qǐng)Tom來中國,欣賞黃岡更美好的綠水青山、藍(lán)天白云。

寫作要求：1.詞數(shù)90左右(短文的開頭已經(jīng)給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù));

2.根據(jù)要點(diǎn)提示,可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;

3.短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名及校名。

參考詞匯:lie(位于); Dabie mountains; plant; clean up; clear river and green mountains

Dear Tom,

Thanks for your last letter. You asked me about my hometown, now let me tell you. _______________________________________________________________________________

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Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Ming

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Tom,

Thanks for your last letter. You asked me about my hometown. now let me tell you.

My hometown is Huanggang. It lies by the Yangtze River and at the southern foot of Dabie Mountains.

It's a beautiful city with a long history. A number of famous people come from our city, such as Li siguang, Li shizhen, Wen Yiduo and so on. There are lots of beautiful mountains, rivers and lakes. They are so fascinating that thousands of tourists come to visit Huanggang every year. You can also see beautiful villages everywhere. We are proud of our hometown.

Now the people in Huanggang are trying to protect the natural environment. We plant trees as many as possible every year. We stop factories from throwing rubbish into the rivers. Volunteers go to the mountains, forests, parks and streets to clean them up on the weekends. Everyone is playing a role in making our city more and more beautiful. We are taking action!

Tom, would you like to come to Huanggang? You can see clear rivers and green mountains as well as blue skies and white cloud. I believe you will fall in love with our city and have a wonderful time. Looking forward to your visit!

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Ming

【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，以“美麗的黃岡”為話題,向我的英國筆友Tom介紹一下我美麗的家鄉(xiāng)——黃岡。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱為第一，二，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：My hometown is……，It lies……，There are……，We are proud of……，Would you like to……？You can……，I believe……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。