Question

【題目】(B)圖示作文：根據(jù)圖畫內(nèi)容，展開想象，寫一篇小短文。

小安是一名初三的學(xué)生，運動讓他的生活發(fā)生了巨大的變化。請根據(jù)所給圖畫，展開適當(dāng)?shù)穆?lián)想，完成下面的短文。

要求：(1)話題作文或圖示作文任選其一。

(2)詞數(shù)在80100詞之間。

(3)要求字跡工整，語法正確，意思連貫，合乎邏輯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

Answer 1

【答案】Sport makes a difference

Xiao An is a Grade 9 student. He used to be very weak and had to take a lot of medicine. He wanted to be as healthy as his classmates, so he decided to do sports.

He joined Zhao Yang Football club and practiced hard there. Because of football, his life has changed a lot. He finds himself much healthier than before. Now, he has grown into a tall and strong guy. What’s more, he is very good at playing football. Last month, he took part in School Football Match and won the Best Player Award.

Xiao An needn’t take a lot of medicine any more. Sport makes a great difference to his life.

【解析】

本文屬于圖畫作文，表達運動讓小安的生活發(fā)生了巨大的變化。根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。

亮點說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點詞句，如used to do, take medicine, as+形容詞原級+as, decide to do, because of, what’s more, be good at, take part in, not...any more以及make a great difference等。增強邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。