Question

【題目】 現(xiàn)在，焦作市正在努力爭創(chuàng)“全國文明城市”（National Civilized City）。你學(xué)校的English Club正在舉辦以“文明焦作，關(guān)系你我”為主題的征文活動。請你根據(jù)以下的內(nèi)容提示及要求寫一篇征文稿。

內(nèi)容提示：

1.尊敬師長，明禮誠信；

2.友善待人，樂于助人；

3.遵守交規(guī)，不闖紅燈；

4.保護(hù)環(huán)境（2-3個例子）

要求：

1.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱等相關(guān)信息；

2.詞數(shù)80左右。不包含已給出句子的詞數(shù)。

Civilized Jiaozuo, You and Me

We are glad that Jiaozuo are doing what can be National Civilized City. As students, what shall we do?

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Answer 1

【答案】Civilized Jiaozuo, You and Me,

We are glad that Jiaozuo are doing what can be National Civilized City. As students, what shall we do?

First of all，weshould respect our teachers，parents and the old．Also，we ought to be polite and honest．Second，it is always good to be kind，friendly and helpful to others．Third，we must obey traffic rules and mustn't cross the streets when the traffic lights are red．Last but not least，it's important and necessary to help protect the environment．For example，We shouldn't spit here and there or throw litter about．We'd better not pick flowers or step on the grass．

In short，if everyone makes contributions，our city will be better and better.

【解析】

這是一篇給材料作文。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)來寫，人稱為第一人稱。所給出的寫作要點比較具體，我們要做的就是用正確的英語把要點表達(dá)出來。動筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不要遺漏要點，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮寫作中要適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

亮點說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)，主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點詞句，如good to be kind，friendly and helpful to others，Last but not least，help protect the environment等。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，句子通順，行文連貫。