Question

【題目】假如你是李華，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下圖反映的現(xiàn)象圍繞“拒為低頭族”(stop phubbing) 這個(gè)話題寫一篇不少于90字的英語(yǔ)短文。

內(nèi)容包括： 1)．你身邊有“低頭族”嗎？他們的表現(xiàn)；
2)．“低頭族”給學(xué)習(xí)和生活帶來(lái)的影響；
3)．就如何“拒為低頭族”提1-2點(diǎn)建議。
要求： 1)．文章開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
2)．可以使用親身經(jīng)歷或虛構(gòu)的故事；
3)．圖片只做參考，內(nèi)容可以自由發(fā)揮；
4)．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。
Nowadays, many people are crazy about their mobile phones. They look at their phones everywhere all the time, taking no notice of the people around them.
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Answer 1

【答案】Nowadays, many people are crazy about their mobile phones. They look at their phones everywhere all the time, taking no notice of the people around them.
There is a lot of phubbing around me. My cousin likes playing with mobile phones very much. He can't stop sending text messages, surfing the Internet, playing mobile games and even taking photos with mobile phones.
However, phubbing disturbs not only our studies, but also our life. Phubbing, whether playing phone games or sending text message, particularly in class or at work, is a big waste of time. What's more, it can lead to health problems. For example, using a mobile phone too much can cause eyes or back and neck pain.
In my opinion, it is time for us to throw away our phones and raise our heads. We should do more exercise and take part in real-life activities. When we use phones properly we can live a happy life.
【解析】本文敘述的是低頭族帶給人們的學(xué)習(xí)和生活帶來(lái)的影響，所以句子應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)時(shí)，所寫的句子要符合英語(yǔ)語(yǔ)法，盡量使用高級(jí)詞匯，短文用了一些短語(yǔ)和句式，如：be crazy about sth對(duì)某事癡迷；take no notice of沒(méi)有注意；lead to導(dǎo)致；it is time for sb to do sth到了做某事的時(shí)間了；take part in參加；用了whether和when引導(dǎo)的從句，增加了文章的亮點(diǎn)。