Question

【題目】書面表達

節(jié)假日，人們不愿意呆在家里，而是越來越喜歡外出游玩。請根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示，寫一篇英語短文。

內(nèi)容提示：

1．人們喜歡看不同的事物，做有趣的事情；

2．節(jié)假日時所有的交通工具都很忙，買票難；

3．越來越多的人開始自駕游。

要求：

1．文章中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名；

2．文章應包含所有提示內(nèi)容，可適當發(fā)揮；

3．詞數(shù)：90左右。

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Answer 1

【答案】Nowadays people prefer going out for a trip to staying at home during the vacation. They enjoy watching different things and doing something interesting. It's becoming more and more difficult to buy tickets, so more and more people drive their own cars to take a vacation. This makes the traffic very heavy. But I think it's better to go out by bus or by train though we have to buy tickets and wait for a long time, because at least it can make a good effect on the environment. Do you agree with me?

【解析】這篇習作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如prefer to，go out for a trip，stay at home，during the vacation，enjoy doing，more and more，take a vacation，by train，have to do，wait for a long time，at least，agree with sb.等。而It's becoming more and more difficult to buy tickets, so more and more people drive their own cars to take a vacation./ But I think it's better to go out by bus or by train though we have to buy tickets and wait for a long time, because at least it can make a good effect on the environment.等復雜、多重從句結(jié)構(gòu)的運用，使本文表達豐富，句式多樣，是本文的最大亮點。