Question

隨著陽光體育運(yùn)動(dòng)在全國的開展，“每天鍛煉一小時(shí)，健康工作50年，幸福生活一輩子”理念深入人心。校園里出現(xiàn)了可喜的變化：運(yùn)動(dòng)時(shí)間變長(zhǎng)了，運(yùn)動(dòng)項(xiàng)目增加了，學(xué)生體質(zhì)增強(qiáng)了，校園生活豐富了。請(qǐng)以Sports in Our School 為題給校刊寫一篇報(bào)道。
內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)提示：
1. 運(yùn)動(dòng)時(shí)間    2. 運(yùn)動(dòng)種類    3. change of students’ health and study
4. change of school life
練習(xí)跳繩：practice rope skipping  大課間：during the break
要求：80詞左右，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

Answer 1

Sport in Our School
Sports in our school have changed a lot. Now we have more than three PE classes a week, and we have at least one hour to exercise every day.
Students get so excited at these changes. More and more students take an active part in ball games running and jumping on the playground.
Our school life is becoming more wonderful. Doing sports is a good way to relax and keep fit. What’s more, a healthy body can help us study better and live a happier life.

解析試題分析；這是一篇給材料作文，寫一篇關(guān)于校內(nèi)體育活動(dòng)的新聞報(bào)道。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱為單數(shù)第一，三人稱，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)，主謂賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意運(yùn)用所給短語。寫作中注意敘述順序，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。文中適當(dāng)使用代詞，注意避免句式的單調(diào)重復(fù)，避免單詞及語法錯(cuò)誤。
考點(diǎn)：提綱類作文
點(diǎn)評(píng)：此類作文考查的是學(xué)生基礎(chǔ)的寫作能力，主要是一些基礎(chǔ)句型的應(yīng)用。平時(shí)學(xué)習(xí)中應(yīng)注意對(duì)于一些常見句型句式的記憶，聯(lián)系默寫此類句型。對(duì)于一些比較經(jīng)典的段落，有目的的進(jìn)行背誦，考試作為參照。這尤其對(duì)于敘述的邏輯問題有很大的幫助。