Question

【題目】、書面表達(dá)

假如你是李磊。你的美國筆友Tom對中國的傳統(tǒng)文化很感興趣。請你用英語給他寫一 封80詞左右的電子郵件，介紹一個(gè)或兩個(gè)中國的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日，如春節(jié)(Spring Festival)、中秋節(jié)(Mid-Autumn Festival)等。

要求: l. 開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)人總詞數(shù)。

2. 語句通順、表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確、內(nèi)容連貫。

3. 文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)校名和姓名等相關(guān)信息。

參考詞匯: decorate裝飾

Dear Tom,

I'm very glad to tell you something about

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Yours

Li Lei

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Tom,

I'm very glad to tell you something about Spring Festival.It’s a traditional festival in China. It comes in winter.

It’s time to get new. We usually clean and decorate our house carefully before it comes. I always help my mother clean the windows and wash the clothes. We put on chunlian on the door and chuanghua on the window.

It’s time to get together. Everyone go home to get together with their family, though someone is far away from home. They must have dinner together on that day. They must visit their relatives and friends and say “Happy new year” to them. When the kids greet their grandparents, they can get money.

Yours

LiLei

【解析】

試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。在題目中讓我們介紹一個(gè)或兩個(gè)中國的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日。本篇文章介紹了春節(jié)的一些活動(dòng)，與我們的生活很相符。另外，寫作時(shí)，還注意了語句間的銜接，使文意連貫，表達(dá)流暢。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊這是一篇比較不錯(cuò)的作文。作者講述了春節(jié)期間人們的生活情況。這些內(nèi)容都比較貼合文章的需要，意思也很連貫。文章中還用了一些比較好的句型，如Everyone go home to get together with their family, though someone is far away from home.等。