Question

【題目】Ⅴ. 書面表達(dá)

假定你是李華，你最近認(rèn)識(shí)的英國筆友David給你發(fā)了一封電子郵件，想了解你初中三年來在學(xué)習(xí)和生活方面的一些收獲、困惑和感受。請認(rèn)真閱讀下面的郵件，根據(jù)信中的內(nèi)容及你的實(shí)際用英語回復(fù)。

To: lihua@ china. com

From: davidsmith@ Britain. com

Subject: School life

Dear Li Hua， Glad to hear you're graduating from junior high. I'm interested in how you feel about those three years of school life. Would you please tell me the following things? ●What do you like best about your school life? ●What’s the biggest problem as a junior student? ●Who has helped you most? And why? ●Do you enjoy your school life? Why or why not? I look forward to hearing from you soon. All the best， David

注意:1.詞數(shù)90左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);

2.回復(fù)須包括所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使全文連貫、通順;

3.文中不得提及真實(shí)的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。

Dear David，

Thank you so much for your email. I'm very happy to tell you about my school life.

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Best wishes，

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear David,

Thank you so much for your email, I’m very happy to tell you about my school life.

I like the Football Club best because I’ve made quite a few friends by joining the club.

Moreover, it’s an excellent chance to learn team spirit.

However, I’ve also made some problems over the three years. The biggest one is how to achieve a balance between my schoolwork and my hobbies. Whenever I am in great need, my English teacher always comes to me, so she is the person who helped me most in the junior high.

In all, I enjoy my school life because it’s colorful and meaningful.

How about your school life ? Write to me soon.

Best wishes,

Su Hua

【解析】試題分析：本篇書面表達(dá)是一封郵件，結(jié)合所給的寫作材料，寫出初中三年來在學(xué)習(xí)和生活方面的一些收獲、困惑和感受。根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示可知本文會(huì)使用到一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)、現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)態(tài)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意連詞、固定短語的交替使用，使文意連接緊密，還要注意使用豐富的語句，注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系，最后最好要表達(dá)出人物的感想和看法。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。文中made quite a few friends, moreover, however， between... and... , in all, best wishes 等詞(組)的恰當(dāng)使用，使上下文意連接緊密；文中還多處使用了定語從句、原因狀語從句等復(fù)合句，大大增加了信息的容量，使文章增色不少，值得學(xué)習(xí)。