Question

【題目】書面表達（滿分15分）

2015年4月11日，南京溧水傅家邊山地半程馬拉松比賽（Nanjing Lishui Fujiabian Mountain Half-Marathon）在傅家邊隆重舉行。假如你是李華，請用英語給你的筆友Jim寫一封電子郵件，告訴他關于本屆半程馬拉松的相關情況和你對舉辦這樣比賽的看法。

要求：

1. 郵件需包括所有提示內容，可適當發(fā)揮。

2. 詞數(shù)：80字左右，信的開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

3. 文中不能出現(xiàn)真實的姓名和學校名稱。

Dear Jim,

I’m very glad to tell you something about Mountain Half-Marathon which was held in Fujiabian, Lishui.

Please come and visit my hometown. I will show you around my beautiful hometown.

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Jim,

I’m very glad to tell you something about Mountain Half-Marathon which was held in Fujiabian, Lishui.

You know health is becoming more and more important in our daily life. In order to encourage more people to take part in sports and keep the body healthy, our local government held this big event. And at the same time, it was a good chance to show the beauty of my hometown. Because it was mountain half-marathon, runners needed to finish about 21-kilometre-long race, and all the runners must be over 18 years old and healthy. During this event, there were lots of volunteers. Some of them worked as doctors, some kept the event safe and others provided free drinks and food. With the help of all these people, the event had a big success. I hope more events like this can be held in the future.

Please come and visit my hometown. I will show you around my beautiful hometown.

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇命題作文。本篇短文主要講述偶爾在南京溧水傅家邊山地舉行的半程馬拉松比賽，文中交代了比賽的目的；距離；運動員；志愿者；及作者的觀點。寫作時尤其注意主謂和時態(tài)的正確。可適當使用一些連詞來增加文章的邏輯性，使文章更通順流暢。

寫作亮點：這篇短文結構完整，要點齊全，表達準確流暢。文章使用了很多實用的表達方式，如：You know health is becoming more and more important in our daily life；And at the same time, it was a good chance to show the beauty of my hometown.這些句式的運用給文章增色不少。