Question

【題目】書面表達

你班打算組織一次為期兩天的旅游。給旅行社寫封信，按照你們的預(yù)算，提出食、住、行、游等方面的具體要求，請旅行社予以安排。（信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出）

Dear Sir/Madam,

We are students of East Senior High School……

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Yours sincerely,

Yao Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Sir/Madam

We are students of East Senior High School. We’d like to ask your travel agency to arrange for us to take a two days’ trip. According to our budget, I will give you some requirements which you can take into consideration.

In the first place, my classmates are determined to go to Hangzhou .Therefore, please make arrangements for us to visit the West Lake and other famous historic and cultural sites. In addition, it is because some of our members enjoy eating delicious food that we would like to have meals in restaurants which have achieved instant fame. As for the hotel, we don’t have any other special requisition except that the hotel must be clean and tidy. Finally, I want to remind you that because our time is limited, you can arrange for us to go to Hangzhou by advanced passenger train or by airplane.

As has been mentioned above, I hope that you can satisfy our demands as much as possible. I am looking forward to your reply.

Yours sincerely,

Yao Hua

【解析】1. 本命題很明顯屬于應(yīng)用文，形式是書信，內(nèi)容是表達旅游者的意愿和想法，請旅行社

對于衣食住行的要求予以安排。

2. 時態(tài)應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)為主，設(shè)計打算方面的內(nèi)容用一般將來時，陳述以第一人稱為

主。文章結(jié)構(gòu)可按要點劃分，分為三段：

（1）說出目的。

（2）對于旅行社衣食住行安排的具體要求。

（3）最后一段總結(jié)。