Question

書(shū)面表達(dá)（15分）
假設(shè)你是Tony根據(jù)提示語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇自我介紹，包括姓名、年齡、班級(jí)、國(guó)籍、家庭成員及職業(yè)和喜歡的顏色和食物，詞數(shù)80詞左右。（要求用上所有提示語(yǔ)）
提示語(yǔ)：Tony,  13 years old,  Class 4,  Grade 1,  England,  father, teacher,  school,  mother,
doctor,  brother,  driver,  favorite,  blue,  vegetable
                               
                                                                                        
                                                                                        
                                                                                        

Answer 1

I’m Tony     
My name is Tony. I’m 13 years old. I come from England. Now I study in a school. I’m in Class 4, Grade 1. I have a happy family. My father is a teacher. He teaches in a school. My mother is a doctor. She works in a hospital. And my brother is a driver. I love them very much. my favorite color is blue and I like vegetables best. Do you want to make friends with me?      

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，要求寫(xiě)一篇介紹自己的短文。通過(guò)閱讀材料可知這篇短文主要使用的人稱就是第一人稱，時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，這方面需要注意的問(wèn)題比較少。動(dòng)筆前可以按照材料內(nèi)容列出簡(jiǎn)單提綱，寫(xiě)出關(guān)鍵單詞。寫(xiě)作中注意語(yǔ)義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系。上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：做英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)時(shí)，要注意認(rèn)真審題，分析體裁，確定時(shí)態(tài)；分析內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，列出一些基本詞匯及詞組；注意表達(dá)的條理性，用好連接詞。最后，注意不要犯語(yǔ)法、句法以及搭配性錯(cuò)誤，寫(xiě)好后多讀多修改，我想一定會(huì)寫(xiě)出滿意的文章來(lái)。