Question

【題目】書(shū)面表達(dá)

今年入冬以來(lái)，以北京為首的各大城市霧霾（haze）情況越來(lái)越嚴(yán)重，整個(gè)國(guó)家的空氣污染狀況令人擔(dān)憂。作為一個(gè)中學(xué)生，你對(duì)我國(guó)空氣污染的看法是什么呢？請(qǐng)分析空氣污染的現(xiàn)象，原因，應(yīng)對(duì)措施，寫(xiě)一份英文的倡議書(shū)，呼吁大家保護(hù)環(huán)境，減少對(duì)空氣的污染。

要點(diǎn)提示：

1. 我國(guó)空氣污染的現(xiàn)象。（至少寫(xiě)2點(diǎn)）

2. 空氣污染產(chǎn)生的原因。（至少寫(xiě)2點(diǎn)）

3. 減少空氣污染的措施。（至少寫(xiě)2點(diǎn)）

要求：

1. 80詞左右，開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

2. 文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和所在學(xué)校的名稱。

Dear students,

As we all know, hazy days have been influencing our lives a lot in recent years . That warns us of the serious air pollution. ______________________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

Dear students,

As we all know, hazy days have been influencing our lives a lot in recent years. That warns us of the serious air pollution. Big factories, power plants and cars all can cause air pollution. for example, chemicals in the smoke from power stations cause a lot of damage. Besides, the people's activities are also the sources of air pollution such as throwing the rubbish and smoking. What's more, the more trees are cut down, the less polluted air can absorb. Air pollution is becoming more and more serious, so we should take some measures such as planting more trees and stop factories from sending out waste air, what’s more, we had better walk or take a bus. Protecting the environment is our duty. Everyone should play a part in saving the earth.

【解析】

試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。把要點(diǎn)寫(xiě)全面，不要漏掉任何要點(diǎn)。注意文章文體和時(shí)態(tài)。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。要求語(yǔ)句通順、意思連貫。文章結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊、行文連貫、表達(dá)清楚。寫(xiě)作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，序數(shù)詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)：本文寫(xiě)作思路清晰，時(shí)態(tài)運(yùn)用也很得當(dāng)。更為難能可貴的是通篇文章沒(méi)有出現(xiàn)任何語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。

這篇短文結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，主要是一些基礎(chǔ)句型的應(yīng)用非常準(zhǔn)確。先提出問(wèn)題，分析問(wèn)題，后闡述解決問(wèn)題的辦法，層次分明。最后，發(fā)出倡議：呼吁大家保護(hù)環(huán)境，減少對(duì)空氣的污染Protecting the environment is our duty. Everyone should play a part in saving the earth.