Question

假如你叫李華，是陽(yáng)光鎮(zhèn)的一名中學(xué)生。你想在學(xué)校創(chuàng)建一個(gè)英語(yǔ)角，為此，你在班級(jí)學(xué)生中展開調(diào)查，調(diào)查結(jié)果如下。請(qǐng)根據(jù)表格中的內(nèi)容，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文，描述同學(xué)們的看法和理由，并發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn)。

???????? 觀點(diǎn)	?????????????????? 理由
65%的同學(xué)贊成	提高英語(yǔ)口語(yǔ)水平 獲得知識(shí)，開闊視野 學(xué)會(huì)與人交流
35%的同學(xué)反對(duì)	1. 作業(yè)多，沒時(shí)間 2. 英語(yǔ)不好，不敢開口
你的觀點(diǎn)	….

要求：1）短文應(yīng)包括所給所有信息， 并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

????? 2）語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，語(yǔ)法正確，條理清楚，字跡工整。

????? 3）詞數(shù)：100詞左右。開頭已給，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

?? We plan to set up an English Corner in our school. To know about what the students think about it, we’ve made a survey about it in our class. Here are the results.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

We plan to set up English Corner in out school. To know about what the students think about it , we’ve made a survey about it in our class . Here are the results.

?? 65% of the students think it’s a good idea to set an English Corner. Firstly ,they can improve their spoken English by joining it . Secondly, students can not only get knowledge but also open their minds. Thirdly , students will learn how to communicate with others.

However, 35%of the students don’t think so. Some of them are so busy with their homework that they have no time for it . Others are not good at English, as a result , they are afraid of speaking English in front of others.

In my opinion, I think we should set up an English Corner to practice speaking Englsih. If so , we will be more and more confident of using English.

【解析】試題分析：考查提綱類書面表達(dá)：這是一篇提綱類作文，我們需要用正確的英語(yǔ)把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來. 動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體,故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá).寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】范文中運(yùn)用一些常見的短語(yǔ)set up建立； communicate with與某人交流； as a result 結(jié)果；are afraid of 害怕；in front of在。。前面； In my opinion在我看來； practice dong sth練習(xí)做某事。Secondly, students can not only get knowledge but also open their minds.在這個(gè)句子中not only ..but also 連接兩個(gè)并列的謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞，時(shí)態(tài)保持一致。Thirdly , students will learn how to communicate with others.這句子中特殊疑問詞+不定式做動(dòng)詞的賓語(yǔ)。However, 35%of the students don’t think so. Some of them are so busy with their homework that they have no time for it .這個(gè)句子中用到so…that ..如此以致于。

考點(diǎn)： 提綱類作文。