Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)（共1題，計(jì)15分）

假入你是Linda, 16歲，一個(gè)開朗外向、樂于助人的女孩。你需要向美國(guó)Brearley School遞交申請(qǐng)，其中，需要說明你曾參加過的志愿者活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下信息寫一封申請(qǐng)書。

1) 簡(jiǎn)單向?qū)Ψ綄W(xué)校介紹自己的基本情況；

2) 從下面四幅圖中選擇兩項(xiàng)志愿者活動(dòng)，并介紹你參加這兩項(xiàng)活動(dòng)的情況；

3)描述參加活動(dòng)的感受。

clean up parks cheer up sick kids raise money for charity give out ads

Dear Brearley School,

I’m writing to you in hope of studying in your school.

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

Dear Brearly School,

I’m writing to you in hope of studying in your school. My name is Linda, I’m 16 years old. I am an outgoing girl. And I’m always ready to help others. I joined a volunteer activity last year. I really enjoyed it. I helped clean up parks, for it can not only help protect environment but also remind people of environmental awareness. I also went to hospitals to cheer up sick kids. I played with them and told them stoyies, they were very happy to be with me. Ithink it’s a good way for us students to learn and communicate by volunteering, and it is of great importance. I’m looking forward to your letter.

Yours,

Linda.

【解析】

試題分析：通過審題，可知這是一篇給材料作文。要求根據(jù)圖片及提示句子寫一封信。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，并且給出了具體要求，我們要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來。動(dòng)筆之前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意時(shí)態(tài)和時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配及主謂一致問題。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：通過題目要求可以看出，1.本文可能使用的時(shí)態(tài)是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過去時(shí)。2.可能用到的句型或短語(yǔ)有（除了提示短語(yǔ)外）：be ready to do sth. not only...butalso. It’s a good way for us to do sth. look forward to doing sth. 3.最后檢查全文，使行文流暢，語(yǔ)法拼寫要正確。