Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)。(10分)

根據(jù)圖片提示，寫一篇40詞左右的英語短文，向同學(xué)們介紹一下你的朋友Nick的家庭情況。

Nick is my good friend.

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Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

Nick is my good friend. He is an English boy. He is ten years old. He has a big family. These are his grandparents. His father is Paul Smith. His mother is Jenny Jones. Mike Smith is his uncle. Susan is his aunt. His uncle and his aunt are English teachers. Nick loves his family.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給看圖作文，根據(jù)圖畫介紹Nick的家庭成員。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱為單數(shù)第三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：Nick is...; He is...; These are...; His father is ...等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系，注意文后要表達(dá)Nick對(duì)家人的愛。

【寫作亮點(diǎn)】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡(jiǎn)練。開頭介紹了我的朋友Nick和國(guó)籍和年齡，接下來介紹他的家人：祖父母、父母、叔叔和嬸嬸，最后表達(dá)Nick很愛他的家人。此處good friend, a big family, English teacher等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。