Question

【題目】英國某中學邀請你校學生代表團于7月中旬去訪問交流，假如你是成員之一，請?zhí)崆皽蕚湟环萦⑽拇鹬x辭。

提示：

1、感謝邀請和接待；

2、希望在文化習俗，創(chuàng)新與發(fā)明方面有交流；

3、重點介紹一個中國傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日；

4、邀請他們來日照。

要求：

1.根據(jù)內容，可適當發(fā)揮；

2.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實的人名和校名；

3.詞數(shù)90左右。（開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）

參考詞匯：創(chuàng)新innovation 接待 reception

Ladies and gentlemen，

Good evening! It’s really a great honor for me to speak here.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

That’s all. Thank you!

Answer 1

【答案】Ladies and gentlemen，

Good evening! It’s really a great honor for me to speak here. I extremely appreciate your invitation and reception.

To start with , I sincerely hope more chances will be given to exchange our culture, customs, innovations and inventions in the near future. What’s more, it’s known that China possesses a long historical culture standing. Therefore, a lot of festivals are celebrated, among which the Mid-Autumn Festival is a great importance. It is regarded as a symbol of family reunion and usually celebrated in the middle of autumn. On that day, all the family members get together and enjoy delicious moon cakes while enjoying the moon. Children usually ask their parents to tell the story of Chang’e. Finally, I warmly welcome all of you to Rizhao, a young and modern city.

That’s all. Thank you!

【解析】

這是一篇答謝辭，時態(tài)上應該用一般現(xiàn)在時，要點要包括1、感謝邀請和接待；2、希望在文化習俗，創(chuàng)新與發(fā)明方面有交流；3、重點介紹一個中國傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日；4、邀請他們來日照。

亮點說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務，語言表達符合英語習慣，準確運用時態(tài)，主謂一致，在文中使用了主語從句，定語從句，特別使用一些亮點詞句，如It’s known that…，a symbol of，get together等。增強邏輯關系，增加上下文意思連貫，句子通順，行文連貫。