Question

書面表達。（15分）           
在過去的幾年里，你的家鄉(xiāng)一定發(fā)生了很大的變化。請你比較過去和現(xiàn)在，根據(jù)漢語提示，從家鄉(xiāng)人們的衣食住行等方面，寫一些家鄉(xiāng)的可喜變化。文章的開頭已經(jīng)給出，詞數(shù)80左右。
過去：人們生活貧苦，房屋破舊；人們不愛護環(huán)境，隨處扔垃圾；交通不便。
現(xiàn)在：住房寬敞明亮，許多人都有了自己的車；大家都保護環(huán)境，山變綠了，水變清了，天變藍(lán);交通方便了
為家鄉(xiāng)變化感到自豪,要為家鄉(xiāng)……
The changes to my hometown
My hometown is a beautiful city near the Yellow Sea.
                                                                                
                                                                                 
                                                                       

Answer 1

The changes to my hometown
My hometown is a beautiful city near the Yellow Sea.
In the past, my hometown was very small. The house in it were very old. There were no factories or schools here, and the traffic was very poor. The villagers lived a hard life.
Now there have been great changes in our hometown. At present, people live in big houses and many people even have their own cars. Everyone takes action to protect the environment. The water in the river is clean and the sky is blue. The new roads are wide and there are a lot of traffic on them. Our lives are becoming better and be tter.
As a student, we can work hard now. And in the future, we can make our hometown more and more beautiful.

這是一篇給材料作文，根據(jù)中文提示詞描述一下家鄉(xiāng)過去，到現(xiàn)在發(fā)生的一系列變化。由于材料已經(jīng)給出，故寫作時主要就是把材料內(nèi)容用正確的英語表達出來。寫作中應(yīng)注意準(zhǔn)確應(yīng)用時態(tài)。比如在介紹家鄉(xiāng)的過去時就應(yīng)用過去時態(tài)，介紹現(xiàn)在時就可能用到完成時態(tài)與一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)。同時應(yīng)注意上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，適當(dāng)應(yīng)用連接詞。尤其注意最后要適當(dāng)寫一點自己的看法，觀點不一定要新穎，但要積極向上，盡量撿自己有把握的寫。