Question

【題目】書(shū)面表達(dá)

假如你叫李華，是九年級(jí)的一名學(xué)生，自從上個(gè)月你們學(xué)校為迎接義務(wù)教育均衡發(fā)展督導(dǎo)團(tuán)的檢查，你們學(xué)校發(fā)生了很大的變化，現(xiàn)在請(qǐng)就你的所見(jiàn)所聞及感受寫(xiě)一篇100字的文章。

要求：包含以下要點(diǎn)，語(yǔ)句連貫、通順。開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

1.所有的老師熱愛(ài)他們的工作，對(duì)學(xué)生嚴(yán)格要求，彼此密切合作，以便使得課堂生動(dòng)有趣。

2.學(xué)生也非常尊重（respect）他們的老師，上課……(自由發(fā)揮1-2點(diǎn))，課后按時(shí)完成并上交作業(yè)，遇有困難向老師求助。

3.學(xué)生愛(ài)好廣泛，積極參加各種課外活動(dòng)。許多九年級(jí)的學(xué)生參加……,因?yàn)?/span>……。學(xué)生之間更友好，時(shí)刻準(zhǔn)備著互相幫助。

4.學(xué)生盡力保持校園的干凈美麗，（舉1-2例）。

5.感受……（1-2點(diǎn)）

Since our school got ready to meet the check of the balanced development of compulsory education last month, great changes have taken place in our school. Now our school is more harmonious(和諧的) and beautiful.

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Answer 1

【答案】Since our school got ready to meet the check of the balanced development of compulsory education last month, great changes have taken place in our school. Now our school is more harmonious(和諧的) and beautiful.

All teachers love their work and they are strict with students .Also they work closely with each other to make the class lively and interesting.

We students also have great respect for their teachers.We can finish our homework on time after class and hand it in. If we have any difficulty, we can ask the teacher for help. Students have a wide range of hobbies and actively participate in various after-class activities. Even many ninth-grade students take part in them because they think they are good for their study . The students are more friendly and ready to help each other. Students try their best to keep the campus clean and beautiful.They mustn’t throw rubbish everywhere.

In my opinion, students try their best to make their own campus more beautiful. I am glad to see the changes.

【解析】

本文屬于材料作文，講述學(xué)校發(fā)生的變化。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。

亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別適用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如be strict with, each other, hand in, ask sb for help, participate in, take part in, be good for, be ready to, try one’s best to, in my opinion等。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。