Question

【題目】假如你是李磊，你的美國筆友Tom對中國的傳統(tǒng)文化很感興趣。請你用英語給他寫一 封80詞左右的電子郵件，介紹一個(gè)或兩個(gè)中國的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日，如春節(jié)(Spring Festival)、中秋節(jié)(Mid-Autumn Festival)等。

要求: l. 開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)人總詞數(shù)。

2. 語句通順、表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確、內(nèi)容連貫。

3. 文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)校名和姓名等相關(guān)信息。

參考詞匯: decorate裝飾 get together 團(tuán)圓 symbolise 象征著，代表

Dear Tom,

I'm very glad to tell you something about _________________________________

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Yours

Li Lei

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Tom,

I'm very glad to tell you something about Chinese traditional festivals,

The Mid-Autumn Festival is one of the most important festivals in China, which is celebrated on the 15th day of the eighth month of the Chinese lunar calendar.

The Mid-Autumn Festival is an evening celebration when families gather together to eat moon cakes,which are the special food for this festival, and enjoy the round moon. They can look back on the past and look forward to the future together. On that night, the moon appears to be at its roundest and brightest. The full moon is a symbol for family reunion, which is why that day is also known asthe Festival of Reunion.

Yours

Li Lei

【解析】試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。本文主要是向美國筆友介紹中國傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日的文章�？梢赃x擇其中的一個(gè)進(jìn)行重點(diǎn)介紹。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章表達(dá)流暢，具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】這是一篇比較不錯(cuò)的作文。作者講述了中秋節(jié)期間人們的生活情況。這些內(nèi)容都比較貼合文章的需要，意思也很連貫。文章中還用了一些比較好的句型，如The full moon is a symbol for family reunion, which is why that day is also known as the Festival of Reunion.等。