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書面表達。
李雷和他的同學要到圓山去春游。因為春天是爬山的最好時候。天氣好，即不會太冷也不會太熱。李雷和他的同學騎自行車去圓山，結果在路上，李雷拐錯了彎，發(fā)生了交通事故，傷到了右腿。所以說遵守交通規(guī)則對于我們來說非常重要。 我們平時必須遵守 交通規(guī)則。 1. 注意交通燈。紅燈停,綠燈行。  2.不要騎得太快，應該靠右邊行。3. 騎車要小心，戴頭盔。 4. 不能違反交通規(guī)則， 否則會被罰款。

Answer 1

How to obey the traffice rules
Li Lei and his classmates wanted to go to Mount Yuan for the spring field trip.
Because spring is the best time to climb mountains. The weather is very fine. It’s not too cold and not too hot. Li Lei and his classmates decided to go there by bike. But on the way, Li Lei made a wrong turn, and a traffice accident happened. Li Lei’right leg was hurt.( His classmates had to send him to the hospital.) So it’s very important for us to obey the traffice rules. First, when the lights turn red, we must stop. When the lights turn green, we can cross the road. Second, we shouldn’t ride too fast and we should ride on the right of the road. Third,we should always be careful and wear bicycle helmets when we ride bikes. Fourth, if we break the traffice rules, we’ll get a fine.

解析試題分析：本文首先對李雷和他的同學選擇春季去旅游的事情進行講述，說明春季旅游的好處。然后，對李雷由于忽視了交通規(guī)則，拐錯了彎而傷到了右腿的事進行敘述。最后，從四個方面說明遵守交通規(guī)則的重要性，在四個方面的敘述中注意邏輯上的條理性，可以利用First, Second, Third, Fourth來增強文章的可讀性。
考點：提綱類寫作
點評：初中英語的作文，著重考察學生連詞成句的能力，要在“準”字上下功夫。在寫作中注意人稱與謂語動詞的數(shù)關系和動詞時態(tài)等諸多方面。在對所出現(xiàn)的問題或是采取的措施描寫中注意使用連詞或是好的句式如have a  far-reaching effect on sth對…有深遠的影響等。對于中學作文的寫作，盡量將所學的知識運用到作文中，寫出富于變化、結構緊湊的文章，不要出現(xiàn)中式英文。在平時的練習中，注意多背誦范文，對于寫的好的句子進行默寫，考試時就能寫出準確地道的作文。